Thank you all for your support!!! The former-mentioned rejection letter has not swayed me in the least. That was just a shot in the dark while persuing the Self Published route. And I'm still moving right along.
So! Can I ask for yoru assistnace please? For the Back Cover Blurb. Does this work?
"Have you heard of crystal grids but wondered what they are, how they work and how you work with them? Me too! That’s why I wrote this book. This is not an airy-fairy sort of crystal healing book. Using science as our platform, you’ll explore the “how’s” and “why’s”. Through my love of “science-y” subject matter, I help explain what a crystal grid is, the sacred geometry foundation of them, their energy fields, the connection to Mother Earth’s own grid, how you can use them with distance healing work, how to set your intention, how to choose a grid formation, the components of a crystal grid, how to select which crystals to use in your grid, how to activate and maintain your grid, how to charge other objects within a grid and even some practical grid “recipes” for various purposes! This practical guide will help you to infuse crystal grids into your everyday life in a powerful way. Being practical, you’ll find this guidebook outlined with clear, basic instructions on specific crystal grids and their use."
Honest feedback is much appreciated. :)
I love it! Kept my attention without feeling it was in over my head!!!! *wink*
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Try using a colon and listing the pusposes instead of so many comas, otherwise it's great!
ReplyDeleteI think it sounds great! I have two suggestions though. I think you should mention the fact that you are a science teacher. People respect that. It carries weight, and is something to be proud of.
ReplyDeletePerhaps instead of listing one thing after another with commas, what about listing them in bullet points. I love bullet points. It makes things easy to understand. Here is an example:
Through my love of “science-y” subject matter, I help explain:
~what a crystal grid is
~the sacred geometry foundation of them
~their energy fields and the connection to Mother Earth’s own grid
~how you can use them with distance healing work,
~how to set your intention
These are just my silly suggestions. Otherwise, I think your writing sounds great! :)